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"After having finished IGCSEs, year 11 went on a four-day trip to Pa Ngam Mountain Lodge in Prajeenburi. Upon arrival, we were greeted by the talented twins, P’A and P’B. After having settled in, we began with one of the many fun activities they had in store for us; the water challenge. The challenge consisted of team building activities, the flying fox, and jumping from a 6-metre platform into water. Everyone had a marvelous time, which was evident in the hilarious photographs photographed by the skilled photographers of the Pa Ngam crew. "